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Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter Two
UGH. Man. I knew there were going to be soooo many typos/errors. I was so tired when I was editing this lol. That first one... Oh, god. I laughed so ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: Please.
I was thinking the same thing about the 'can,' but wasn't sure. I'm glad you pointed that out! Pleas does sound better. Oops, I thought I had changed that 'its.' ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Please.
I have been struggling with that line! I had it that way before then I changed it. I think I'm going to change it back, though. Thanks for your review, ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: Please.
Yeah, it's personal for me to. I wrote it and I don't really like it. I I feel like this is a poem that's hard to like in general just ...
Sep 8, 2013 -
Re: The Begging Contention
Shalom, I wandered onto this exposition presupposing this to be a homage to the nineteenth century's greatest authors. In lieu what I've unveiled is the antithesis of what the literary ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Mirror to Mind.
Hi! Oh, I had it before. I was changing the settings and I must have hit none on accident. Oops! When I read through the poem, 'mind' comes out very ...
Sep 1, 2013 -
Re: Mirror to Mind.
Hi! Thanks for your review, hun! (This turned out to be super long, I know. But I really needed to say some things to you.) Definitely insecurity. Not only teen ...
Aug 31, 2013 -
Re: Life Goes On.
No, no. It wasn't harsh. Besides I like criticism. And I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for your review! :)
Aug 26, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One
There will be a little more on her description in the next chapter! I'm glad that you felt that way about the dress fitting because that's exactly what I was ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Prologue
Haha! It definitely took some googling to figure out! Thanks for your review! :)
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One
LOL. I LOVE YOU. Paul Rudd as Callum! In my mind I'm thinking more like... Ian Somerhalder, but buffer. And for Nora, Amanda Seyfried, but brown-eyed. But you are the ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One
I will keep updating! And I'll probably have the next chapter up in a couple of days! I'm so glad you like it! :)
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One
You know I read that anticipation line a lot, and think the same thing. I'll most likely change it. And that sentence did originally end on cry. So, maybe I'll ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Prologue
Oh my goodness! I laughed out loud when you said you pictured Zach Gallifinakis because I could totally see him being Henry! I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks for ...
Aug 25, 2013 -
Re: My People
Well, I have a cat and she is ALWAYS watching me. I thought maybe she was trying to protect me in her own creepy way. And then I wondered what ...
Aug 25, 2013
