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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter Two

    UGH. Man. I knew there were going to be soooo many typos/errors. I was so tired when I was editing this lol. That first one... Oh, god. I laughed so ...

    Sep 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Please.

    I was thinking the same thing about the 'can,' but wasn't sure. I'm glad you pointed that out! Pleas does sound better. Oops, I thought I had changed that 'its.' ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Please.

    I have been struggling with that line! I had it that way before then I changed it. I think I'm going to change it back, though. Thanks for your review, ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Please.

    Yeah, it's personal for me to. I wrote it and I don't really like it. I I feel like this is a poem that's hard to like in general just ...

    Sep 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Other Re: The Begging Contention

    Shalom, I wandered onto this exposition presupposing this to be a homage to the nineteenth century's greatest authors. In lieu what I've unveiled is the antithesis of what the literary ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​Mirror to Mind.

    Hi! Oh, I had it before. I was changing the settings and I must have hit none on accident. Oops! When I read through the poem, 'mind' comes out very ...

    Sep 1, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: ​Mirror to Mind.

    Hi! Thanks for your review, hun! (This turned out to be super long, I know. But I really needed to say some things to you.) Definitely insecurity. Not only teen ...

    Aug 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Life Goes On.

    No, no. It wasn't harsh. Besides I like criticism. And I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for your review! :)

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One

    There will be a little more on her description in the next chapter! I'm glad that you felt that way about the dress fitting because that's exactly what I was ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Prologue

    Haha! It definitely took some googling to figure out! Thanks for your review! :)

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One

    LOL. I LOVE YOU. Paul Rudd as Callum! In my mind I'm thinking more like... Ian Somerhalder, but buffer. And for Nora, Amanda Seyfried, but brown-eyed. But you are the ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One

    I will keep updating! And I'll probably have the next chapter up in a couple of days! I'm so glad you like it! :)

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Chapter One

    You know I read that anticipation line a lot, and think the same thing. I'll most likely change it. And that sentence did originally end on cry. So, maybe I'll ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Perfectly Imperfect: Prologue

    Oh my goodness! I laughed out loud when you said you pictured Zach Gallifinakis because I could totally see him being Henry! I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks for ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My People

    Well, I have a cat and she is ALWAYS watching me. I thought maybe she was trying to protect me in her own creepy way. And then I wondered what ...

    Aug 25, 2013


I just write poetry to throw my mean callous heartless exterior into sharp relief. I’m going to throw you off the ship anyway.
— Vogon Captain (The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy)