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;) Yup If you have anything to say, say it to the writer!

No, thank you. And thanks for the clarification. Keep it up :)

With that the solider turned. Is not supposed to have more added, it's holding suspense (though i did not separate paragraphs). Also the big gap was not supposed to be ...

No thanks a lot! And this is not supposed to go more than this it is simply a prologue leading to a greater tale ;). Thanks though.

Thanks! But due to my brothers wanting the rest of the story will not be posted. He wants to some day make it into a novel. Thanks a lot though ...

Thanks! also the Prologue was not supposed to be so high up, for some reason when i posted it that's where it ended up XD. But thanks any way

Thanks for the review! as explanation our soldier (which would be explained later in the book) was not really one but simply was on the edges of it for an ...