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Re: Not Suitable For Children Under 12 Years
Hey SlowTime here to review. Also I want to give you give some tips. I liked this poem, but there where just a few things i want to touch base ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Close the Doors.
Hello. SlowTime Here to give some advise suggestions and ideas. This story has a good theme to it, and an interesting concept. But that said, it has a few things ...
Sep 7, 2015 -
Re: Optima Dies... Prima Fugit
Hello! SlowTime here to give an opinion and some tips. Firstly this poem is very confusing. He is in a coma? Desk chairs? The whole concept is shaky and hard ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: Over the Hills and Far Away (Over The Hills: Part 1 of 3)
Hello SlowTime here! Just want to give some ideas opinions and some praise! First off this story was grate. They way it captured me was outstanding! You really put your ...
Sep 6, 2015 -
Re: The train of separation.
Hey! just here to give some tips. Lots of your sentences are unfinished or are missing words. If you go through them you would see what i mean. Also lots ...
Sep 3, 2015