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Tagging: @scribbleinks @Stormcloud and @DarkPandemonium Whenever you have time if you could give it a quick read, that'd mean a lot to me. I think this scene has some pretty ...

Hey! Thanks for reviewing! I'm happy you enjoyed it! And oh my I can't believe I totally missed that the last bit wasn't clear. Yes, it is implying a romantic ...

Awesome. Thank you!

Hey! I've finally been able to make the changes you suggested and I changed the entire ending of the scene. Would you mind giving it a quick read and tell ...

Hey. Thank you so much for taking the time to review my poem. Means a lot to me! Thanks :D

Hey. I'm happy I was able to help and I'll be happy to answer questions 1. I reckon the feeling that this Moon Dance feels different sounds really interesting to ...

Hey thanks for the review! 1. Mostly I'm just happy that you felt something and that you totally got what I was going for. Thanks for that 2. I 100% ...

Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it I think you're right on it being confusing as there are a couple of references in the poem that probably don't make any ...

Hey. Thanks so much for taking a look at it! :D 1. I 100% agree with you about capitalizing props. I was only doing it because I had seen it ...

Oh my! I am not sure if you are seeing this weird glitch but every time I used an apostrophe it replaced it with the HTML code for it? Weird. ...

Ohhhhhhhhhhh okay that makes sense! My bad, I%u2019m sure you can understand where my confusion came from! On second thought the Zombie thing used as a slur is a pretty ...

I seem to have accidentally posted this comment and I can't seem to delete it? Weird... Anyway. Thanks if you actually read it. That's pretty cool. This was mostly a ...

Oops... Thanks for pointing that out... I'll fix it now! :D Thank you so much for being so kind and thank you for the lovely review. You are completely right ...

And yeah... I should of ended it that he realises that his mother is the true hero but the impact wouldn't of been the same... Like Uhm... I don't know... ...

Hey, Yeah I know where you are coming from and you are correct. I agree with you 100% and its good that you saw that. It shows that you are ...