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Re: The Nighttime Sky.
Hello there! I'm Jackie & I'll be reviewing your poem. The Nighttime Sky Somehow, I wasn't sure whether this is just the title again or whether it's actually meant to ...
Oct 4, 2009 -
Re: Vision
Hi there (: Um, where can I start off? I read this, like, 20 times. And I still don't get it. At all. could you see what I see First ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: A Simple Black Dress
Hi there! I'll be reviewing (or trying to, since i'm not such an expert) your poem today. First of all, the story. It's not really original, is it? We've heard ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: the lost
Hi there! (: There is not much to be added to the reviewers before me. However, I have a little idea for you: People before me have mentioned the rhyme. ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: Lemongrass
Wow. I totally loved it, every single word! Usually, I prefer poetry with rhyme, but this one proves that it can have a great flow without rhyme. Someone has mentioned ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: As the World Crumbles (ch.1)
Hi there (: You already got a great and long review from Incognito Temptation, but still I couldn't resist telling you a few things about your text. I just read ...
Jun 8, 2009 -
Re: Violence in motion
Hello there (: I'm going to get started right away.. I breathed in again, drawing the smooth tobacco of an American cigarette, with tobacco picked by some spic that swam ...
Jun 8, 2009