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Re: Removed by Author
That was nice. One of the best pieces I've read in the whole community, go you! You could've perhaps detailed that street a bit more though, since I couldn't really ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: ProjeKt Oath prologue
Comments in red ! Mostly opinions - I'm just pointing out what 'feels weird' to me. Feel free to ignore my ramblings. The Oath Prologue He feels he has walked ...
Jul 5, 2008 -
Re: Kiss of Darkness
Hurr. Pros and cons incoming! Pros: Grammar. Did well thar, didn't notice any major flaws. Easy to read. It just, swished by, the text! It flowed like... something very flowy, ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
*Takes a deep breath* I liked it, sorta. Heh, hehe... Hee... Don't kill me! As someone mentioned before about a uh, nobleman... This one's definately a book for thinkers. You ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Chronicles of Gaia
Bravo. I thoroughly enjoyed that! You've a solid mythology that could've been taken from any top novel out there, a great way with words, and I liked how you described ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Difference
Commenting in red ! *Dons his red critique cloak* Feel free to ignore my ramblings, I'm no expert. :D His eyes twist and sparkle when I look at him, the ...
Jul 3, 2008