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Re: Embrace of the Undead - Chapter 2
All the songs I have mentioned are real :D
Jan 18, 2014 -
Re: Sonnet #69
Shakespeare! Cool! :L I love how you put you own interpretation into this :3 I actually found the first too sentences quite hilarious. I read them and was like "mmmm ...
Dec 4, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 7
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww thanks i'm all happy now :3
Jun 1, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 4
Um ok?
May 31, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 4
Thank you! Keep reading and I swear it will get good, dude.
May 30, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 4
Oh, there is a reason it's all jumpy and the narrator usually changes his mood quite abruptly. You'll find out at the end though ;)
May 30, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 3
Thanks for the review :3
May 30, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 3
Thanks for this review. I'll try and clean up the first person narrative. I also will try to use more periods. Also the reason some sentences are short is because, ...
May 30, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 6
Thanks!
May 20, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 6
Thanks for reviewing! I will try and take your advise into account. Oh and the Mother is just a bit damaged. Also, the main charcater isn't a girl. It's a ...
May 20, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 5
Thanks I'll edit it when I get free time. Also the main character is a guy. Is there anything that makes him sound like a girl?
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 1
Oh its a boy ^^ Is there something I said that makes him sound like a girl? Thanks
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 3
Im gonna update soon :L
Apr 12, 2013 -
Re: the mystery of eight fingers
Um this is more of a summery of the story :/ maybe you should've added more to make it seem like a first chapter. I would like to learn more ...
Apr 8, 2013 -
Re: The Ballad: Chapter 1
Why thank you :L
Mar 29, 2013
