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SkylerLestrange

SkylerLestrange

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Embrace of the Undead - Chapter 2

    All the songs I have mentioned are real :D

    Jan 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Sonnet #69

    Shakespeare! Cool! :L I love how you put you own interpretation into this :3 I actually found the first too sentences quite hilarious. I read them and was like "mmmm ...

    Dec 4, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: The Ballad: Chapter 7

    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww thanks i'm all happy now :3

    Jun 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 4

    Um ok?

    May 31, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 4

    Thank you! Keep reading and I swear it will get good, dude.

    May 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 4

    Oh, there is a reason it's all jumpy and the narrator usually changes his mood quite abruptly. You'll find out at the end though ;)

    May 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 3

    Thanks for the review :3

    May 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 3

    Thanks for this review. I'll try and clean up the first person narrative. I also will try to use more periods. Also the reason some sentences are short is because, ...

    May 30, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 6

    Thanks!

    May 20, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 6

    Thanks for reviewing! I will try and take your advise into account. Oh and the Mother is just a bit damaged. Also, the main charcater isn't a girl. It's a ...

    May 20, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Romantic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 5

    Thanks I'll edit it when I get free time. Also the main character is a guy. Is there anything that makes him sound like a girl?

    Apr 29, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: The Ballad: Chapter 1

    Oh its a boy ^^ Is there something I said that makes him sound like a girl? Thanks

    Apr 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Ballad: Chapter 3

    Im gonna update soon :L

    Apr 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Mystery / Suspense Re: the mystery of eight fingers

    Um this is more of a summery of the story :/ maybe you should've added more to make it seem like a first chapter. I would like to learn more ...

    Apr 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: The Ballad: Chapter 1

    Why thank you :L

    Mar 29, 2013


“Isn't it nice to think that tomorrow is a new day with no mistakes in it yet?”
— L.M. Montgomery, Anne of Green Gables