Skydreamer

Hey I'm gonna give this a go at reviewing! ^^ It's short and while I see room for improvement I'm not exactly sure how to direct it. The first thing ...

How'd you like a review? XD This was an interesting story, I felt though that as a whole it seemed like you changed your mind on how you had wanted ...

Hey, I'm going to review this! So the first thing that I noticed with this is the formatting, I think it could be re-looked/organized a bit and I'll show you ...

Hey I'm going to go ahead and give a review, superman! First off I think that maybe making a letter was not the best idea, but that said, I did ...

Hey Kay here to review! XD First of all I'd like to say that it is truly sweet that you wrote this about your sister! I love my sister dearly ...

Hey Kay I'm back for another review! XD First Stanza I really enjoyed reading this first stanza, I thought that it was nice to read and it had great slow ...

Hey! I really like this so I'd like to just pop in a give it a quick comment on how it could be spaced out a bit more and separated ...

Hey I'm gonna review your poem! XD It looks interesting. I'll be quoting and then commenting/suggesting/editing. Also before I start I wonder if you wanted to make it into stanza's ...

Whooooo! Dreamy posted something! Dreamy posted something! XD Help me calm down! I'm so happy you broke through and wrote. And this is really good! I do have some suggestions, ...

I do not have a place to call home. There is no bedroom that I grew up in, no house that's always been mine. In fact, my family has never ...

Alright Alpha, here I come! XD I really like it! I do have suggestions though! I'll be quoting your stanza's. Bird of prey, Awaits for The decay I think this ...

Logi....Cowl. THIS IS...I AM...I'm speechless. XP I love this. I don't care what other people think, because I just think this is great. I mean your ideas, and such, and ...

Blackie I'm reviewing this! I'm going stanza by stanza. XD First Stanza I am not going to really write anything about this stanza other than complimenting it. I really liked ...

Alrighty. Here I am to review! First off this work was kind of strange through-out, but interesting and unique. Actually I don't mind the rhyming paragraphs, I like them, and ...

Hey you're my twentieth review! XD The very first thing that I'm going to suggest/help with is show how this could possibly be dissected because if there's one thing I ...