SkyIsDead

Hey there! I was intrigued by the title, and hence decided to give this piece a read. The ambiguity of 'If I Could' gives a lot of room for exploration! ...

Hello there! Your story proved quite the pleasant read, and hence I decided to review it, so here goes! :3 Starting your narrative with a dialogue was really effective here, ...

I liked the rhyming scheme, and keeping it to four lines per stanza does serve its merit here too. Excellently placed metaphors throughout as well! Grammatically perhaps in the third ...