Skittles

Thank you! I will definitely go back an fix that. And yes, Eliane was dead the whole time. Are there certain parts you think I should make that clearer. I ...

Thank you! I will definitely go back an fix that. And yes, Eliane was dead the whole time. Are there certain parts you think I should make that clearer. I ...

Thanks!

Thank you, thank you, thank you. I was really looking forward to someone reviewing the second chapter. As usual, I will be reviewing my work and taking in revisions you ...

Thank you so very much! The critique was very insightful and I will be taking note of all of it. It's good to get an assortment of opinions so I ...

Thank you very much! :)

thanks for the support!

Well, welcome to YWS! And thank you for the review, nicely done. I changed a lot of it after reading this. Enjoy the site! :)

Thanks for reviewing! I'm definitely going to change it up a bit. This was just pre-planning I guess you could call it. Just getting my main character figured out. You ...

wow! this is yeah, just gunna like this piece... ~Skittles P.S. CONTINUE THIS STORY!!!! i wanna learn more!

*Likes* This was a breath of fresh air. I read it right before i went to sleep and am happy to tell you, it gave me wonderful dreams.... I have ...

Thank you all! I have made the revisions as well, and thank you for the support! ~

you story grabbed my attention as it vividly set me in your setting. I loved your description and find myself wanting a chapter two! Please continue writing this or i ...

Thanks so much Solvalery, it's did help!

Hey can you PM me when you post more of your stuff? It's like I'm addicted...I love reading and helping you! ~Skittles :elephant: