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Crazy upbringing. Sounds like you're a free bird! And you're stronger and wiser and kinder for all the previous crap heaped over you

Oh darn, it encrypted my cowboy emoji

Glad it held your attention %uD83E%uDD20 the second prologue half will bring to light more concrete background on Vlawk'thropa and its/their origins

Thanks so much! I was definitely shooting for as exotic a perspective as was reasonably discernable. Took roughly two weeks to iron out, and it likely still has confusions I ...

That's neat, it flows thru the transits now! I think toward the end with the church tho you may have an unnecessary break? It's isolated but seems to be talking ...

An ellipsis of some sort, like the stars at the end - - or could be as simple as hyphens. Anything that makes the reader hit a bump to absorb ...

When you switch settings during flashback, at least the first time, it would be helpful to have some sort of breaking marker. Neat perspective tho. Should I blame the mayonnaise, ...

When you switch settings during flashback, at least the first time, it would be helpful to have some sort of breaking marker. Neat perspective tho. Should I blame the mayonnaise, ...