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  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: waffle house.

    Crazy upbringing. Sounds like you're a free bird! And you're stronger and wiser and kinder for all the previous crap heaped over you

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Technology Re: $igh'lent sonics: (plug & Tension) = re*Cognition

    Jan 5, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Culture Re: Prologue: Zoo-Yow!Ugly $urGEonz

    Oh darn, it encrypted my cowboy emoji

    Dec 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Culture Re: Prologue: Zoo-Yow!Ugly $urGEonz

    Glad it held your attention %uD83E%uDD20 the second prologue half will bring to light more concrete background on Vlawk'thropa and its/their origins

    Dec 29, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Culture Re: Prologue: Zoo-Yow!Ugly $urGEonz

    Thanks so much! I was definitely shooting for as exotic a perspective as was reasonably discernable. Took roughly two weeks to iron out, and it likely still has confusions I ...

    Dec 29, 2022
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Snap

    That's neat, it flows thru the transits now! I think toward the end with the church tho you may have an unnecessary break? It's isolated but seems to be talking ...

    Dec 22, 2022
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Snap

    An ellipsis of some sort, like the stars at the end - - or could be as simple as hyphens. Anything that makes the reader hit a bump to absorb ...

    Dec 21, 2022
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Snap

    When you switch settings during flashback, at least the first time, it would be helpful to have some sort of breaking marker. Neat perspective tho. Should I blame the mayonnaise, ...

    Dec 21, 2022
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Snap

    When you switch settings during flashback, at least the first time, it would be helpful to have some sort of breaking marker. Neat perspective tho. Should I blame the mayonnaise, ...

    Dec 21, 2022


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