Skell

why dont i ever see you write any fiction, not that your poetry is bad, i just think with your talent you could write a Great story.

I liked it but i had trouble understanding what your main point was, I only read it once since its late but it didn't click for me sorry, :(

Its not bad, i find that some of the starts to my favorite stories, start off as a quick thing i wrote while i was bored, and then it grows.

its not bad, but as some of the others said it seems to be lacking something, could just be me though. but its seems a little, done, it needs something ...

hey cool piece, but then again you wrote it, lol. I really did like it, the start was great, hope you write and post more.

I know some people didnt like your poetry, but i also dont think you should stop writing because of it. You should come back on the site and write more, ...

I found it really interesting and loved the idea, but some of it was a little confusing, especially about who was talking at times and what exactly was happening, but ...

awww you still havent posted anymore of the story. its been ages, *shakes* see withdrawal symptoms. You are a good author and i want to read mroe of it. please ...

As i already told you, brilliant, love it. I think everyone can relate to it, who doesnt have a small place in there mind that is there own. Where nothing ...

and the great writing continues. I love your work. if you write this book to the end i really think you could get it published. But be sure not to ...

Hey thanks for the advice, yeah i know what you mean about the names i will be changing James when i think of another name for him, but John i ...