Sins

Thanks for your feedback, it's very much appreciated :D

Yeah, it's just one of those things that slips through the crack sometimes!

hihi! Apologies for taking a while to reply to this (and chapter six's review), my internet went AWOL for a few days and I actually had to do uni work. ...

Of course! Apologies for taking a while to get back to you, my internet went AWOL for a few days. I'll PM you my email now :)

Aw good, thanks! I'm glad your'e enjoying :3

Aw, thank you, it's awesome to hear you enjoyed :)

Sorry for taking eons to respond to this, I completely forgot! I'm a bad person, I know. I'm sooooo glad this clears most things up. The dialogue tags (or lack ...

I know, right? I'm an awful UK dweller. Though in my defence, I'm from South Wales, where you'll be lucky to find a train, let alone one that goes to ...

Yeah, I might eventually decide on somewhere specific, but for now it's all ambiguous and what not :P That's cool, I've lived in the UK for 20 years and still ...

Pfft, don't sweat it! Yeah, the names thing is more of a warning thing, really. As characters grow and develop, it won't be an issue because remembering them (and their ...

You're so like me with recollections of your own novel, and I love it

Yay, good, I made sense for once! :P I'm so glad you appreciate my potatoness

Ermahgerd, it's voodoo. Voodoo, I tell you! The strong voice-weak plot thing has been a big issue for me in the past, so I am glad you brought it up ...

Thanks for another great review, Pretzel! :) I often struggle with the balance between info-dumping and just being way to unclear in regards to worldbuilding, so I definitely agree with ...

ohhidere. Thanks so much for all your reviews, they were awesome ofc. It's awesome to hear you're enjoying things so far, and you've brought up some good points. Apologies if ...