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Yeah, it's not a big deal but throwing in some here and there would be good, methinks! No worries anywho, I look forward to the next instalment :)

Oops, that's just me being as forgetful as a goldfish with half a brain then. If it is only mentioned in the first chapter though, it might be a good ...

No worries, it was my pleasure! I look forward to reading the next installment :)

No worries, I'm glad I could be of help in some way! Bringing more to light in the third chapter will probably be fine, like I said, it was more ...

Thanks muchly for reading and reviewing this :) The dad phone call thing is a very good point, and I'd not even thought about it, so I really appreciate you ...

Thanks for le review 8) Yeah, no, the 'shaking' and 'realise' thing is just me being a nonce, imma fix that. I'm always bad at spotting stuff like that so ...

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No worries, absolutely nothing wrong with disagreeing at all. For me personally, your hints were a little too vague, but for others it wouldn't be a problem. That's the thing ...

Thanks for your help! The opening paragraph bugs me too; it's something that was initially more relevant in the initial plans for the novel, but isn't so much now. I ...

Aw, thank you, I'm glad you're enjoying! I think some more shorter sentences would work well here, so thanks for pointing that out. I like your suggestion on having a ...

Thanks for le review, I'm super happy you're enjoying things so far. You have a fair point with Angela, it was just one of those things I wrote without really ...

Yay, I was helpful! Oooo I see, I look forward to it.

One day I'll write a story entirely about first aid, just for you

Thanks muchly! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter overall, and it satisfied your first aid desires :P Yeah, I actually based it on an experience I had where I was ...

Thanks so much, this review is insanely awesome. And don't worry about being harsh, I like being torn to shreds :P My first written language isn't English, so awkward phrasing, ...