Sins

I feel you on the enigma thing, I've had many a character over time who I just can't pin down properly. They really do have a mind of their own, ...

Ah, I see, that makes sense! I lowkey liked the thought of him pondering over an answering machine for ages, mind you :P Ooooo exciting. I have to say, I ...

Don't get me started on characters being a pain int he butt to write, I feel you on that one. But ooooo, you've intrigued me. I'd assumed it was some ...

So long as you have an idea of what their backgrounds etc are, that's the main thing! And aw, I'll miss Dante, so you've definitely avoided the issue of readers ...

Hey, I can wait, it's cool! I'm generally a fan of contemporary fiction, so I definitely have the patience. I'm just a bit weird in the sense that when I ...

The likelihood is that the confusion is just me being dumb, so take it with a pinch of salt :P

Maybe it is just an English thing, yeah! I don't think it's a huge problem, either way :) Oh I see! That's quite interesting actually, I like that idea. If ...

Ah, I see, that makes sense. I quite like that idea actually, the sort of self-sabotage thing she's got going on. It'll definitely become apparent if she continues that sort ...

Ah, I see! That makes total sense. She doesn't need a massive presence or anything (I'd not expect that), just perhaps a few mentions here and there so no one ...

Yeah, you've struck the balance with Liz's voice perfectly imo, so yay go you! And eh, the description thing is really not a huge issue; more of a grasping at ...

Ah that's okay then, I was dreading you replying with 'err, we've met her about 10 times?' But nah, I totally get that. Maybe just give some kind of brief ...

To be fair, I did explain that rather badly :P I could tell that this was a eureka moment of sorts, maybe just not as OMG as intended, perhaps? Anywho, ...

Yeah, that's fair. It's just making sure to strike the balance between professional with hints of personal, just to make it not seem so sudden and random when all this ...

Ahhh, this does all make more sense now that I know it's an actual psychiatric disorder emerging in Paula. Hm, it's a tricky one. What I'd maybe suggest is to ...

I'm glad I could be of help, this was a pleasure to read! Ah, I see. The family being outside does make it make more sense, and to be fair, ...