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  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Sun and Shadow: Dakota's story chapter-1 beginning

    Hey there, violetbutterfly, I was browsing the Green Room when I came across this so I thought I better come and review it :) The sun rose up in the ...

    Jun 12, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Technology Re: Black and White [3]

    Finally, I have reached the third part, yay for progress! How could she have let it come to this? She had been so hopelessly naive, so convinced that she could ...

    Jun 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Technology Re: Black and White [2]

    It's me again! Quinn would pry and Aaron would never give in, that’s how it was. Technically, this should be that was how it was because that's (that is) how ...

    Jun 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Technology Re: Black and White [1]

    Hey there, I am here to review as requested! I'm going to try and review all three parts and it hopefully shouldn't take me too long. If you have any ...

    Jun 11, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Horror Re: When All That's Dead

    Hey there, bekka, and welcome to YWS! I hope you stick around because this really is an awesome website, and it's the best one I've come across for improving my ...

    Jun 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Character Teaser Intro- Isaac Eagle

    Hey, Aquila, I'm here to review your piece you have here :) I'm really big on characterisation (I cannot express to you how much I thrive off it), and so ...

    Jun 10, 2013
  • Script » Film, Realistic Re: Closets Scene #1

    Hey there! I can't say I'm too sure why I've decided to review this because my knowledge of scripts doesn't exactly go far (think being forced into reading 'An Inspector ...

    Jun 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: successful failure

    Hey there, Harry, I'm on a bit of a reviewing spree at the moment and unfortunately/fortunately, you are one of my victims! I found this whilst browsing in the Green ...

    Jun 10, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Other Re: Amusement

    Hey Salman! I was browsing through the Green Room when I came across this, and so I thought I'd come check it out and review it for you :) Once ...

    Jun 10, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The High Witch's Niece

    Hey there, Magnus! I am here to review as requested. :) It was the baying of the hellhounds that woke her. The howls drifted up through her open window, feral ...

    Sep 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Literature Re: FREAK - Chapter 1

    Snoink, my good fellow! (or whatever the female version of a fellow is) I am in a reviewing spree mood at the moment, and as you're both fabulous and have ...

    Sep 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Lyrical Re: The Girl and the Coffee Shop; chapter 1.5

    Heya, Dreamwalker! I was just reading your blog about writing prose, so I was very intrigued when I stumbled across this. I'm not sure if this is the same thing ...

    Sep 10, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Science Fiction Re: Love Like Clockwork 2

    I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! ‘Yes, of course. Good afternoon, Monsieur Roussel.’ ‘Good afternoon, Swift, see you next week.’ Now, this is so picky that it physcially hurts, but to me, good af

    Sep 9, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Horror Re: Love Like Clockwork 1

    Twitty-ditty-litty-hit! I haven't reviewed in centuries so this will most likely be awful, but hey ho, that's how the cookie crumbles. I'm also searching through this hot guy's photos on ...

    Sep 9, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Unbroken, Chapter Four, Part Two

    Before I begin: The rain pounds against my rain mac as I jog up the driveway. My feet crunch on the gravel and my shoes splash through puddles, sending water ...

    Jun 24, 2012


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