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Re: Sun and Shadow: Dakota's story chapter-1 beginning
Hey there, violetbutterfly, I was browsing the Green Room when I came across this so I thought I better come and review it :) The sun rose up in the ...
Jun 12, 2013 -
Re: Black and White [3]
Finally, I have reached the third part, yay for progress! How could she have let it come to this? She had been so hopelessly naive, so convinced that she could ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: Black and White [2]
It's me again! Quinn would pry and Aaron would never give in, that’s how it was. Technically, this should be that was how it was because that's (that is) how ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: Black and White [1]
Hey there, I am here to review as requested! I'm going to try and review all three parts and it hopefully shouldn't take me too long. If you have any ...
Jun 11, 2013 -
Re: When All That's Dead
Hey there, bekka, and welcome to YWS! I hope you stick around because this really is an awesome website, and it's the best one I've come across for improving my ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Character Teaser Intro- Isaac Eagle
Hey, Aquila, I'm here to review your piece you have here :) I'm really big on characterisation (I cannot express to you how much I thrive off it), and so ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Closets Scene #1
Hey there! I can't say I'm too sure why I've decided to review this because my knowledge of scripts doesn't exactly go far (think being forced into reading 'An Inspector ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: successful failure
Hey there, Harry, I'm on a bit of a reviewing spree at the moment and unfortunately/fortunately, you are one of my victims! I found this whilst browsing in the Green ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: Amusement
Hey Salman! I was browsing through the Green Room when I came across this, and so I thought I'd come check it out and review it for you :) Once ...
Jun 10, 2013 -
Re: The High Witch's Niece
Hey there, Magnus! I am here to review as requested. :) It was the baying of the hellhounds that woke her. The howls drifted up through her open window, feral ...
Sep 15, 2012 -
Re: FREAK - Chapter 1
Snoink, my good fellow! (or whatever the female version of a fellow is) I am in a reviewing spree mood at the moment, and as you're both fabulous and have ...
Sep 10, 2012 -
Re: The Girl and the Coffee Shop; chapter 1.5
Heya, Dreamwalker! I was just reading your blog about writing prose, so I was very intrigued when I stumbled across this. I'm not sure if this is the same thing ...
Sep 10, 2012 -
Re: Love Like Clockwork 2
I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaack! ‘Yes, of course. Good afternoon, Monsieur Roussel.’ ‘Good afternoon, Swift, see you next week.’ Now, this is so picky that it physcially hurts, but to me, good af
Sep 9, 2012 -
Re: Love Like Clockwork 1
Twitty-ditty-litty-hit! I haven't reviewed in centuries so this will most likely be awful, but hey ho, that's how the cookie crumbles. I'm also searching through this hot guy's photos on ...
Sep 9, 2012 -
Re: Unbroken, Chapter Four, Part Two
Before I begin: The rain pounds against my rain mac as I jog up the driveway. My feet crunch on the gravel and my shoes splash through puddles, sending water ...
Jun 24, 2012
