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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Heiur Blade (Part 6&7)

    Overall, I like it. There are a few things I see that could be changed though. Throughout the story (mostly in the beginning) you use the word 'plunge' and 'plunged' ...

    Feb 24, 2011


Oh, Brightlord Tumul! How unexpected it is to see you standing there! I didn't mean to insult your stupidity. Really, it's quite spectacular and worthy of much praise.
— Wit (The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson)