SimonBolivia

Thank you for your constructive and useful feedback, I appreciate it. I appreciate you taking the time to point out the many bad parts of the story, and these will ...

I enjoyed reading this poem that you wrote, and I think that it told a story with very little text. From what I can tell if might be a poem ...

I enjoyed the story. I found it to be well written, but also has good dialogue between Jo and Oscar. I noticed a few grammatical errors with past tense, but ...

Thank you for all this great feedback! Also thank you for pointing out the grammatical and semantic errors in my writing, this helps me improve. I need to make it ...

Thank you so much for the thorough and helpful review! I understand that I may be using the wrong tense. I also appreciate you taking the time to read the ...

The characters were clearly described, and they were introduced well into the story. I enjoyed the descriptive language you used, and I thought it made the story easier to follow. ...

This was a pretty good introduction to the story that occurs in a series. It seems as though the main character is a somewhat bratty and arrogant kid which I ...

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This is an interesting beginning. So far the writing is engaging and introduces the characters well. It would be helpful if you could include some foreshadowing up until later on ...

Hello there! Thank you so much for the comprehensive review on my first published work here. I really appreciate your feedback with plentiful and constructive critique, and I agree that ...