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Re: Two Worlds Collid - Chapter One
Yeah the previous people pointed out all the grammatical errors :p I loved this but I have to agree that it seemed quite childlike, then again Susan is twelve, will ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: Proluge - Two Worlds Collide
This has such a magical feel, it was a brilliant prologue and makes readers want more, heck I want more! I thought that maybe a good way to avoid mistakes ...
Nov 21, 2011 -
Re: In the House with Chicken Feet (1)
Helo, just reviewing here :) Ok so first up i like the idea, it's kinda relatable in away because when it comes to luck, i think of karma and we ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: .
Hey there! Are you sure you're 15? Cuz this wasn't bad at all and I wouldn't expect this from a 15 year old...hell forget what I just said i'm only ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Shadow: Chapter 1 part 1
OMG This is awesome! You have to keep writing this! Your descriptions were quite good :) oh and the name you used were quite unusual, keep it up! I also ...
Nov 20, 2011