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Re: Whale Pirates
You should write more! I'm just stating to get the feel of it. Maybe you could put a little more description in it? How big is the black ship compared ...
Sep 7, 2011 -
Re: The Writers of Dreams
I would love to hear this as a song. This would be something I would listen to over and over just to get it stuck in my head, something I ...
Sep 6, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chapter Six Part Three
Sorry I've been gone for so long, life's been busy. But, here I am now! I love reading the Masquerader! I'm interested to see how this is going to work, ...
Jul 15, 2011 -
Re: The Debated Importance of Cookies Versus Essays
I'm sorry if my review isn't as good as everyone else's, but I just have to tell you how much I like this story. The beginning made me laugh and ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Dragonmaster Part 2: The Palace of Eternal Sleep
Now I've read up to this point in your novel, and I love it. I absolutely love it. You have great spelling, grammar, word use, and I haven't found hardly ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Break that Fall {Chapter 6}
Aah..... Yes, what a good story about surviving society. I love hos she and Nick have such a history already and understand each other. I love how this story is ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Break that Fall {Chapter5}*edited*
... This is great. I love reading it. It's so obvious how true friends they are. It's the kind of friendship you love reading about. I don't really know what ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: The Masquerader Chapter 6 Part 2
I read it, and I thought it was great. I love how well Ranael played him, and how she surprised him so thoroughly. That's one great poker face she's got. ...
Jun 15, 2011 -
Re: Stand Up
:) Hi! I read this, and I have to say, it's great. I love the rhythm you have, the story it depicts. It's like a letter to an old friend. ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Blue ~Prologue and Chapter 1
Hey Drama! I've got nothing much to review, so I'm reading another one of your stories. First off: I like how the title itself doesn't betray anything yet fits in ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Master Mind: Chapter 1
I like this. It pulls at my imagination, and it makes me want to read more. You described the situation well and even put some of your own voice (or ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Voiceless Chapter One (In progress)
Indian, I read this and I thought it followed up the prologue pretty well. Maybe you could use some longer words, but you're getting there. I like how you've skipped ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: The Elementals (Prologue)
I have read your revised prologue: I like it! That is the kind of thing that makes me want to read on. Simply the air of the dialogue adds so ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: The Legend of the White Dragon- Part 2
Woah. Smashing ending. Haha. I like how you've kept Andre's character shrouded in mystery. I also like how all of a sudden this guy she barely knows is in her ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: the frozen heart and the wood
I had to finish the series. These are great poems. I especially like The Frozen Heart, and The Wood seems a good poem to sum it up. I love how ...
May 17, 2011