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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Hidden in the Dark (Prologue)

    Silver Here! Very Nice! I could almost feel where she was out of the description. The mistakes I caught were: "Waist" It was - Waste. "Affected Dog" It was - ...

    Mar 3, 2015


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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