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Re: Autumn Leap
Tell me what you think :)
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Close Your Eyes
Tell me what you guys think....please :)
Oct 3, 2010 -
Re: The Table
Not sure some of the lines should have been as short as they were, and with the way you have this punctuated almost makes it feel kind of jerky, which ...
Dec 18, 2009 -
Re: For You
Alright! Yep yep, thank you! ^.^ I really appreciate your critique and such- so thank you! :D
Dec 13, 2009 -
Re: Losing Faith
I liked the rhythum in your poem, very nice, and word choices and vocabulary was well put.
Dec 13, 2009
