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Re: Percy Jackson fan-fic (title in works) Part 1
I haven't read a Percy Jackson book since I was in maybe grade 8, so when I started reading this (motivated by nostalgia, haha) I was glad that the main ...
Jul 15, 2018 -
Re: Illusion
I loved this. The stanzas all relate a different aspect of this person's perspective in a way that when combined and presented together construct a breathtaking vision. The language is ...
Jul 14, 2018 -
Re: Until Things Are Safe
This was actually a lot better than I expected. I have absolutely zero memory of writing it or why I did, but it's a lot better than any of the ...
Jul 13, 2018 -
Re: Magpie (Part 1)
There's so much to love here. The dialogue is fun and really gives the reader an impression of who the characters are. Another feature I really enjoyed was how seamlessly ...
Jul 12, 2018 -
Re: Broken Pieces
This was a good poem and aptly describes self-doubt and the fear of letting somebody know you. The structuring kind of makes it feel a bit like lyrics which I ...
Jul 11, 2018
