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Re: Change the Past(?)
Really simple, beautiful poem. Its very easy to read and flows. It is open to personal interpretation, but as a reader I'm really curious why the speaker's present is so ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: campfire hums
If I review your work next time I'll try to remember not to use the word 'repetitive.' I know what you mean. When I submitted my portfolio in class my ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Oh Beautiful Ones
Intricately detailed but I'm not so sure about the third stanza, is it alluding to people blinding themselves into believing their portrayal of themselves as someone who leading a perfect, ...
Mar 8, 2017 -
Re: Confessions from the optimistic pessimist
Firstly I apologise for my shoddy reviewing skills it is my first time on this website, but I do hope in the future with practice I will improve. I like ...
Mar 8, 2017
