SidereaAquila

This was really funny! I loved the outside commentary, and your matter-of-fact way of saying completely ridiculous things. As I looked back over this, I couldn't stop myself from laughing. ...

I am intrigued! I like the outside narrator style when it fits, and it definitely fits here. Your writing is clear and concise, but casual enough to draw the reader ...

Hello! I really enjoyed reading this. I know the italicized description was for context, but for me, it really set up the whole piece. I don't know exactly what it ...

Hello! I clicked on your poem and liked it immediately. The length and structure are very inviting to the eye, which always makes reading a little easier. :) With longer ...