Siam

Okay song. Not bad, but it reminds me of going back to a high school reunion as a very rich (also good looking) lawyer or doctor. Also try to expand ...

No offense to pink puppies or to you misspriss but um.. this poem wasn't very good. There I said it. The way you rhymed it made it seem kind of ...

Wow. I get the point you're trying to get across. the poem was actually kind of good. But I think you need to put more generalization in there. That's just ...