Siageo

Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it!

Thanks for the review I appreciate it and I'll be sure to make changes

Thanks for the review, I really value your input. I will be sure to look over for grammar errors and stuff. Also, the father of Xez is unknown, he mentioned ...

Thanks so much for the review!

Thanks for the review. It starts out really realistic I admit, but as it progresses it turns into a more horror and fantasy based story, I didn't want to rush ...

Thank you so much! I loved the feedback and this really inspired me to continue writing. I developed my character as a part of my personality mixed with friends around ...