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Re: Deleted
This is a really good story so far. The only things I noticed were a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. But, other than that, everything was good. Please keep writing, ...
Apr 20, 2011 -
Re: A Trip to Wonderland
Hello here are just a few things that I noticed: A Piece of chocolate cake ♦That makes me shrink and small - Ok to shrink means to get smaller ♠And ...
Apr 1, 2011