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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Deleted

    This is a really good story so far. The only things I noticed were a few grammar and punctuation mistakes. But, other than that, everything was good. Please keep writing, ...

    Apr 20, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Trip to Wonderland

    Hello here are just a few things that I noticed: A Piece of chocolate cake ♦That makes me shrink and small - Ok to shrink means to get smaller ♠And ...

    Apr 1, 2011


I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights