Shudder

Absolutely! I'd always appreciate your help, however I'm not going to be posting all the chapters on here (probably the first few) but I will PM you anything I finish ...

Don't worry, it was plenty useful! I'll go over an fix my mistakes, thanks for the advice :D

Haha I love this and the subtle references, especially the underworld one :D

Thanks a lot man, this will really help! I really do appreciate it :D And no I haven't published anything...yet, I just read alot so I guess that's where it ...

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This was pretty amazing. All in all I enjoyed it very much, it seems like you have a natural talent for this kind of thing! The detail you use and ...

This was pretty amazing. All in all I enjoyed it very much, it seems like you have a natural talent for this kind of thing! The detail you use and ...

Wow, I have to say this is pretty impressive. All in all this was great and I really liked it! As for negatives, there aren't too many, just a few ...