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  • Short Story » General, General Re: *CRADLE*

    Sup. All in all this was a pretty good piece! I liked the subject as well, it makes it relatable to a lot of people. My only real problem with ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: What We Want

    Sup. First of all, the mistakes: 1) In the first paragraph, there are a few off bits with the italics, so make sure you proof read! 2) Relating to Donziback's ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Fantasy Re: Turn out your Light. Revised Version.

    Sup. Overall this was pretty good. Truthfully I haven't read much historical fiction, but this piece definitely makes me want to read more! I also really like the idea of ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Fear Himself

    Wow, I have to say this is pretty impressive. All in all this was great and I really liked it! As for negatives, there aren't too many, just a few ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Chasing the Sun

    Overall, I really like this story. It keeps the readers guessing what happened to the town which adds an ominous vibe to the whole thing. It's fantastic! I also love ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Ryder R. Hood

    Sup! I'm a little new to this reviewing thing so forgive me is some of my points are misguided :D First, I will start off with the negatives, of which ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spirit of Smiles

    Sup dude! I'm a little new here myself, so forgive me if some of my points are misguided :D Pros: I liked your poem very much, it's quite lighthearted and ...

    Apr 14, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Mystery / Suspense Re: Devils and Demons

    Apart from a few spelling errors, e.g. spelling jael wrong once, the "I've buy and you can provide conversation" line, it was vey good. I really enjoyed this short for ...

    Apr 14, 2015


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