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12. Yay, I got Nate beat. As far as poetry goes, I think it could stand to have its own list. Plays too, because Tennessee Williams and Paul Zindel deserve ...

Haha, Jig -- thanks. I hate you too. ;) And you're right. According to dictionary.com, it's "blasted."

Fabien, thanks so much. I'm pleased you enjoyed it. And Sam -- haha, yay. I'll be taking a look at Hourglass sometime soon.

Thank you very much, Nyconz. Glad you enjoyed it. Sam, I just editted the first post with the final (hopefully) revision. I will PM you right now. Aw, you are ...

Hey, Sam, I love you. But really, thank you for your honest critique. In regards to what you've said regarding the ending, I wasn't quite going for a plastics v. ...

Stev, Thank you kindly, not only for the generous critique, but just for bothering to read. I will return the favor. Lyndsey

i don't have words for this. "incredible," i'm afraid, would fall six (million) feet too short. there were a few typos, but on the whole, a remarkable piece. congratulations.

It's about time you put this up, Ms. Ari. It still really hits home, to say the least. You need to post more of your stuff. And yeah, what's with ...

backgroundbob is just so clever. i didn't like that "and said," was its own line -- but what do i know?

brad: regarding the first issue, it was not my intent evoke emotion. however, i am smarter than to shirk off your comments, and know that i have to make changes ...

TBR: i love you. cadmium: ah, thank you. that was a nice response. i understand that i need punctuation, but i'm just afraid that too much of it will screw ...

Snoink: Thanks for the nitpicks. I just revised those two problem spots as you suggested. And yeah, the beginning still doesn't feel right -- and it's driving me crazy! Gahh. ...

Wow. This is wonderful. Such profound thoughts. Tell me, did you write this all in one sitting, one stream of consciousness, or did you go back and edit multiple times. ...

Question of the Day (maybe Grif can answer this): Why did I get no email saying people had responded to this? Did YWS do away with the response-to-thread emails? I ...

Liz (TBRRRR): Oh my goodness, I've missed you! Thank you for the review ,you are always so kind. Snoink: Gah. I have been trying to do that, but every addition ...