Shriek

I liked this. The imagery you used was great--I felt almost as if I was in the same room, suffocating from the smoke like the speaker. I thought it was ...

Kind of disturbing and graphic, but a good read nonetheless. Innocent, charming Cecilia was a great foil for her domineering, possessive father. The introduction of the story was well done; ...

Wow. Words cannot describe how much I admire this. The imagery you used with the dark vs. light is amazing. There was a desolate undertone ringing throughout the events--I felt ...

Wow, I really like this. It took me a couple times to read it through before I understood, but once I grasped what you were saying, I fell in love ...

Wow. That was an incredibly creative story. It was very well written, and not confusing in the least (not to me, anyway). I've always pictured Lucifer as the dark, mysterious, ...

Brilliant. Your (revised piece) drips with beauty, and I am astounded. The descriptive language was wonderful--my gosh, practically each sentence was bursting at the seams with imagery. The narrator's

I started off really liking the beginning--I'm a sucker for descriptive writing, and you wrote it quite well considering your age. After that, however, the story moved too quickly for ...