Shizzley

Sorry, I just noticed that your new after I posted my review. Just wanted to say welcome and I'm kind of new myself so high five. It was a good ...

I thought that this was a very interesting poem, almost like a vary detailed definition. Maybr you could of split it up into stanzas a bit as it did drone ...

Thank you and yes it is from an old man's point of view who's wife had die. If you watch the clip on YouTube the storyline will become more clear.

You did a really good job with this poem and I can't find anything to improve about it. Your topic was quite mournful and it made me feel quite depressed ...

Thanks to everybody who reviewed, even if there was nothing to improve with this poem, you've helped me improve a few other poems a lot.

Thank you for reviewing this!! :) I will go over it when I get more time and add more details in. You can also watch the animation clip on YouTube, ...