Shiverfeather

I really enjoyed this. It mostly flowed really well. The first stanza was a little jarring when the line length change but that might just be me. I also really ...

It's not too info-dumpy, your explaining the backstory and I think it works well in the story. Though I use wattpad and have acidently found so much info-dumping that I ...

very thought provoking. It isn't something people really talk about, adding to the interest of it. It was well written and sort of happy while still being sad. It was ...

Awesome. You avoided the two plagues of poetry, it wasn't way to metaphorical nor was it stupidly written and cliche. It was amazing and relatable. Usually-i find anyway-that a lot ...