Shinox

Nice poem! It can relate to many of those with writer's block. :x That dreaded thing. I would take out got and replace it with a different word Two days ...

Nice. Drama, drama, drama. :) You could spice it up a bit with more action as Ihighton said; it's got a lot of feelings and emotions. Action was a bit ...

Not bad. It's original, or should I say something new and different from the normal stories. I've never read a story, on here at least, with the same idea as ...

Interesting story! The beginning could have been more detailed though, but it still works. I don't really think the old man was necessary, but again it does work. It doesn't ...