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Re: The Lost Love Found
thank you....and yeah i'll keep the spacing in mind!! :)
Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:58 am -
Re: The Lost Love Found
thank you!! :)
Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:57 am -
Re: The Lost Love Found
thanks...umm..well it was just a short story but i'll keep the tense thing in mind...:)
Fri Jun 07, 2013 5:55 am -
Re: Forbidden Love
hey it was really nice...and seemed direct from the heart. but i felt it could be little more metaphorical. i mean you did use a lot of things to convey ...
Thu Jun 06, 2013 5:05 pm
