Sherlock

I disagree with your third point. Poems don't have set formatting rules. e.e. cummings never capitalised anything, because poetry is not prose. It's your choice.

I want Moar.

Also, I made a mistake. The friendship's border is right. Sorry, I meant to say it sounds better that way. :)

Thank you. :)

It did help, thank you. :)

Thank you, Pencil :) I'll keep the corrections in mind for next time. :)

Thank you, Dogs :)

Thankyou for your review. I appreciate it. :)

I'd put it down as hated, but someone corrected me and told me that that would be an incorrect usage of tenses.

I can't seem to fix "citylike". I don't know why, but it refuses to display it with a space.

Thank you for the review. :)

Thankyou :)

*country's queen.

Thank you, Aria.

Thank You, Hannah. I'm sorry for the lack of imagery, I admit I can do so much more with this. Like I said, I don't really like this poem all ...