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Re: The Secret Service section #10
Hello! I'm Sheep. sorry you had to wait so long to be reviewed. You painted a good portrait of the setting, it seems to be one of your strengths. You ...
Dec 26, 2014 -
Re: One Moment
Hello! Sheep here for a review! The stapling moment in the poem is 'in one moment, everything changed', and the thing is, it's a little stiff. It doesn't flow too ...
Dec 26, 2014
