Shearwater

Aqua- I get what you mean by the whole fast pace thing. I'll try harder next time and I'll do my best to edit this chapter, thank you :) Everyone ...

Hey Pudin! I see you have reviewed this and I have to tell you, it does sound better than before! :D “You’re late for class” Something I always wondered, always ...

Thanks for the reviews guys! I know this is a boring chapter and Aqua, you were right. I was sort of lost when writing this. I'm definitely making it up ...

Thank you Classy. That's just the thing I was looking for! I'm going to go edit this chapter now. I realize that what you said is probably true. And about ...

Ahaha thanks guys. I can always count on you two for reviews. :D Um I've thought about the Kevin and Nick thing a lot. So to avoid cliche's I've decided ...

Jayleigh: aww, I hope you get well soon! :( Thanks so much, I thought I was the only one who was thinking the same thing! well, you're pretty good a ...

Hi! Thanks for the opinions guys, really! :) I think I ended Vince and Vick's conversation quickly on purpose. I have something else planned for them. I just wanted this ...

*hits head on wall* Argh, I can't believe I missed that much. Thanks for pointing it all out. I fixed the things I thought needed fixing and left the things ...

Oh, thanks for pointing that out. I should change that, of course Victoria isn't that 'manly' she's actually quite pretty. I think I'll edit this chapter and put in a ...

Sea Bait is the MC's name and the Title's name. I might change that though... Thanks for the reviews guys, I understand what I've done wrong and I'll go back ...

Aww thanks, that means a lot. It's okay if you don't post a review, I'm glad just to hear comments :D ~Pink

Thank you so much, I'll go over it and fix the mistakes. I've also spotted a few things that I need to change... Thanks for the tip, I'll mess with ...

Wow, I never expected this. I just wrote this one night when I couldn't fall asleep so yeah, wow. Now I just hope the next chapter that I've been preparing ...

Thanks guys! Jayleigh- thanks for pointing that out, I didn't even recognize I left out a period and capitalized dorm. I tried to add a sarcastic remark but I couldn't ...

Thanks, I didn't catch those mistakes! ~Pink