Shearwater

I wrote this story in response to a poem by Charles Bukowski titled "Silly damned thing anyhow." I should have mentioned that in my original post. I should have revised ...

GAH! I hate myself! The thing is, I always memorize what I write so when I reread it, I can't spot those little typos. I will read my work backwards ...

Was going to review these all the other day, but Persephoneia beat me to it on exactly the same day, and I had noticed that we had been reviewing a ...

Wow. It's amazing how fast you guys get to this :) Thanks for the comments! I'm fixing those little mistakes, Other1, thanks for pointing them out. ~Shear

Thanks for the comments guys. I know, I was trying to get the family side out, but I will make the next chapter interesting, I promise. 11 is where things ...

Hey guys! Super thanks for the reviews :) Jai Thanks for the review! You pointed out a lot of mistakes and I've gone through and fixed them ;) I never ...

Thanks for the review Coral :) I get what you mean, more his personality will be shown in the first chapter, I was just trying to built an atmosphere, I ...

I know everyone's a bit upset with Liliah. I mean, so am I. I actually never planned this, it just came out and when I tried to make her hate ...

Oh my goodness, check out those wacky typos. I seriously laughed at myself because of them, Hah. The sad thing is, I never catch them, no matter how many times ...

Thanks for the honest review, Tanya. I totally get what you mean and I went back and edited a bunch of it. Still got the main idea but changed around ...

Thanks for the reviews :) Also, the "Glass Vase" would sound more intriguing if it had a more sinister name. "Glass Vase" seems very vague. Something like Demon's Chalice or ...

Tanya: Super thanks, you're always here when I need ya! :3 Same goes for the rest of you! Thanks for pointing out the mistakes, I can't believe I actually wrote ...

I'm just here to say this was totally awesome and amazing. I enjoyed it immensely! Nice! ~Pink

Thanks for the critiques everyone! And, Livelaughlove, you sound super excited-which makes me super excited ;) Ugh, and again, Whisper catches all my mosquitoes. . . Thanks bud, don't know ...

Hi guys! Thanks for the reviews! Ofir: Thanks for the comment and I totally get what you mean by Olivia, I remember I placed her in chapter three and in ...