Shearwater

Hey Pointe! Yes, you're right I haven't reviewed anything for you as of late. ^^ Okay, to start off with. I noticed you had quite a bit of comma errors ...

Hey, Coral! I'm here to review. As always, I shall begin by telling you how unfitting I am when it comes to reviewing poetry. Also it seems as if you ...

Hai, Mizz! Normally, I don't review non-fiction because I'm not very good at it but I'll do my best for this one. I'll try to help you in whatever way ...

Hey Ranger! I'm here to review. So, this is a pretty short part which is not bad, you still were able to build a nice character and all with this ...

Hi, Alpha! Welcome to YWS. I hope you're enjoying the site as of far. :) First of all, your writing is pretty solid. You have a great understanding of your ...

Hey Wife! Oh wow, you've explored your inner poet. How wonderful, did you enjoy writing this? Because I have the feeling you did. At first I thought it was another ...

Hi there! Nitpicks/Comments The sun was up in the hills above the small logging community of Olsen and it's rays made the blond girls hair sparkle like a lake on ...

Gheal! You didn't tell me you posted something. *meanface* Anyway, I'll review this nonetheless. Okay so it seems like Tanya kind of went over the little nitpicks and what not ...

I always wanted to critique this fifty word story...I don' know why but I'm going to anyway. Firstly, I like the first sentence. It introduces a problem and captures some ...

Hey there! I actually really liked the opening sentence. It was nicely written and felt very um, magical? I suppose that could be the word for it. Anyway, I find ...

Hey there, Pink here to review. The three of us are driving too fast down a road shimmering with noonlight. *moonlight. Since this is a short piece, you should go ...

Hi there! I'm Pink, I'll be doing a quick review for you today. I liked your opener, it was pulling. Your writing was a tad so-so, I noticed a few ...

Hey there! I'm here for a short review. Okay, so I actually really approve of this openers. Nice way of bringing the readers into the story, it's definietly a good ...

Rawr, I come to review. ^^ I’m not active and I have four eyes sometimes. Tell me if there’s something that I have to realize. The first part of this ...

Hey there, Tpak! I didn't like your opener, it was blunt and you dove straight into description of a Victorian house. When you open up a chapter you want to ...