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I enjoyed this! I read it through about three times and it's a very smooth and easy read. The timing is good as is the rhythm. I t is your ...

I really like this! But some things I am confused about: In the beginning of the song you used the words "her" and "she", and then all of a sudden ...

Hey White! I liked the poem, it felt like a song and the rhythm was pretty good although it felt a little off in a few places. It feels like ...