Shalie

This was very funny. "Swaggity swag, swiggity swooty. is my favorite lines. Though I have one issue. Justin Bieber don't belong. Heck, he don't belong in an art/music inc. Haha. ...

Also Thank you. :)

I am writing about the other days. Right now I am having a hard time writing about the their day. I also been busy so I haven't had much time ...

Thanks :)

Either way, thank you for the review I appreciate it. Sorry that it got confusing, and I hope the end product wont be as confusing when it is all put ...

Well I writing on all 12 days that will be put together in one book along with some collection of my poems. Anyways, December 14th is actually 11 days from ...

Thanks so much for the help. I will keep your comments in mind when I edit my story. I think I was too caught up in making sure it wasn't ...

Thank you. :) And you too.

Well, the idea is to make the reader feel as if it takes place in Britain or England. So, I was using some of their dialect, that is why it ...

Thanks. I actuality started this as a challenge more than 500 less than 1,000. Anyways things for pointing out the "told" I did tried proof reading and didn't notice. I ...

Ah, well lol it still think it be neat if there was a hospital like that for visitors to see.

Oh cool I didnt know it was real place id like to visit to

I wrote it this year. ._.U The assignment was to do a poem dedicated to a fruit or vegetable. I am glad you enjoyed it.

Thank you. It's a little late now but apparently the teacher liked it enough to give me a 100. However, I will keep that in mind.

Haha! I didn't get it till I read your title. This is very creative and funny. :D