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Ahhhh I misread that, my bad! I already envisioned him as an old man at that point so I read that as %u201Che was acting like an innocent child%u201D not ...

Thanks so much for the reviews, Omni! I appreciate it! And yeah that makes sense on wanting to read the old first. Although I am changing the opening pretty dramatically ...

Thanks for the super speedy review! I appreciate it!

Thanks so much for the review! The chapter divisions were my mistake lol, they are meant to be part one and part two of chapter one. I have never in ...

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it! :D

Thanks for the review! I appreciate it!

Thanks for the review Vilnius! I appreciate it!

Thanks so much for all of your incredible reviews, Omni! I really appreciate it!

Ahhh thank you so much for the review!!! It was so helpful and SO encouraging! So, the pillar... I don't love that word for it either, but I couldn't find ...

Hey Icy, Thank you so much for the review!! It's really helpful to have your perspectives on this opening, and I'm so glad to know that this draft is an ...

Yay! Thanks so much for the reviews, Omni! I am glad to know that this attempt is going better than the first one. I should have the second half of ...

Hey Vilnius, Thanks so much for the review! I really appreciate it! Yes, Uncle Derik and Lord Ainsley are the same person -- I'll try to clarify that a bit ...

Hey Whatcha, Thanks so much for the reviews! And thank you so much for choosing a recent novel to grab the two chapters from xD I have feared the necromancy ...

Thanks for the review, Omni! I appreciate it! To answer, the fight is still going on. I need to edit it to make that clearer apparently lol. I was thinking ...

Ahaha I'm so glad it brought you joy and not pangs of angst xD Happy RevMo