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Thanks for this review, too! I appreciate it!

Thanks for the review! Aleth is truly terrible, and I'm glad it's so obvious to tell that even jumping in in the middle xD

AHHH thanks so much for the review! I don't have the words to describe just HOW excited it makes me that you're pointing to specific things in this draft that ...

%uD83D%uDC40%uD83D%uDC40%uD83D%uDC40 to you too

Gosh, all of the males in your stories are just jerks... Ahaha no arguments at all xD Thanks for the review, Vil! I appreciate it!

For sure!

Nope lol I%u2019ve been on the site since 2012 and Before the Dragon is one of my more recent projects :)

Thanks so much for the reviews, @Omnom! I appreciate all the work you've put into following this novel so far! You're doing SO good with your Tortoise-ing! You're only two ...

Thanks so much for the review, Vil! These don't qualify for the Revision Contest, do they? I have been around the site for a really long time so these aren't ...

Ahaha I'm so glad they're helpful! I kinda feel like I just scream about things, but I'm having a good time reading it! c:

Fair points! Thanks so much for sticking with this and giving me so many thorough reviews! I think I've done a much better job so far with my revamp on ...

Thank you so much for the review! Super helpful, as always! Arghhhhh I missed the suddenly lol. I actively resisted using it in like 4 different places because I remembered, ...

Hi Em, thanks so much for the review! I appreciate it and I%u2019m glad you enjoyed it! Armor is actually the American way of spelling it ;) Would you like ...

Ahaha gotta love our children xD I honestly went back and re-read it after you responded, and I see now that it should have been obvious he was a child. ...