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Re: Frozen Love, Heated Pain
Hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your story! Wow.......that about sums it up. this story was horrifying- But it a HOLY FREAKING COW THAT WAS SO ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Letters to Mother
Hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your story! I thought it was a lovely story, I have always had a hard time with first person so ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Of a Hungry Fiend (English Homework)
Hi I'm Shadowlight and I had the pleasure of reading your piece. On the whole I thought it was a wonderfully cool idea. I love looking as stories from a ...
Sep 9, 2010 -
Re: Soulswords, Prologue
Hi I'm Shadowlight, You really caught my attention right from the get go. I could almost see, smell, and feel all the things your character was. Awesome job!! the whole ...
Jun 10, 2010 -
Re: How do I delete this...
I loved the idea of this piece. the artist stuck inside his body,mind still sharp but unable to paint. some of your descriptions were confusing and I didn't know what ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: The Sad State of Michael Holtzapfel
Wow.....Wow, Okay the first section of this I was thinking "huh?" but then I got into it and Wow. It was gripping to say the least. I wanted to know ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: A Nursery In Paris, 1783
Hi. I liked your story very much. It hooked me right away and I wanted to know what happened next but I have a few critiques. Through most of the ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: Lost, the Revolutionary
I like the idea of your story set after the battle it gave it an eerie undertone. I was very thrown by the last line though. "He lost to loose" ...
Apr 4, 2010 -
Re: The crow's call, Part one.
Wow.... I liked it! I agree with some of the posts that say there is a little to much description but thinking about it I don't think there is to ...
Apr 2, 2010 -
Re: Charlotte's Hymn part 1
Hey Winie603, Let me first day I liked it. it had a mystery to it that had me intrigued. I was a little confused on what time of day it ...
Apr 2, 2010