ShadowedStart

It was sad but well written. The sad part about is that it actually happens to people.

Thanks for the great review. There is a lot of work that I knew i would have to do because I already wrote more to the story. I knew I ...

Thanks this one was hard for me to keep the pace constant but thanks for saying that. I did not notice how much the pace jumps at times.

Thank you, it is one of my older ones so still need to do more editing to the rest of it as well.