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Re: Tasting the Air
The poem is written beautifully, but maybe some more punctuation could be used? I think it would make the poem flow a little better, at least in my head. :) ...
Feb 2, 2009 -
Re: This Town Doesn't Have Sidewalks
I don't feel like being very negative tonight, so, yeah. First things first. I LOVELOVELOVE the mood. It reminds me of the last few days of school, when we were ...
Feb 1, 2009