ShadowPrincess16

Thanks. The "black roses" are actually just fake roses. I just liked the idea of them I'm in the process of rewriting it as we speak, actually. This is the ...

Thanks for reviewing. I'm thinking about rewriting this but I'm not sure if I should.

I really liked this. While I was reading it I could actually feel the emotions that you were trying to portray. I enjoyed reading this.

I love this one! It was really creative. (Not to mention better than some I've written. )

This is very realistic. I usually don't go for realism, but I think you just changed my outlook on that particular subject. I loved how...well human it was. It made ...

I really liked this. It was...powerful to say the least. I felt everything your MC felt while I was reading it. The only thing that kinda distracted me was the ...

Wow, just wow. I loved this. As I was reading it, I could feel the emotions surging through this poem. You are most definately a talented writer. There is no ...

I really liked this one. I've written several poems like this one, so I'm familiar with the style. The only thing I think needs work is basically the same as ...

Wow, I really like this. I could actually feel the emotions the narrator of the poem (you?) must have been feeling. It was amazing, keep it up! ShadowPrincess16

Wow! This gave me goosebumps. Literally! I loved it. I can't think of anything to criticize about! Keep up the good work.

I LOVE IT! That was one of the best romantic short stories I've read in a long time! I especially liked how you didnt reveal that she was dead until ...

I LOVE IT! That was one of the best romantic short stories I've read in a long time! I especially liked how you didnt reveal that she was dead until ...