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Re: Beware the land of waking dreams.
Wow. From the first line, i loved that poem. I can't think of anything but positive feedback for that poem, although I am no poet :p. At first I was ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The Beginning of the Cursed Prisoner
A couple of things. In your first sentence you say Today was Friday, one of the luckiest days of my life. Perhaps you should say; Today was Friday, soon to ...
Nov 6, 2011 -
Re: .
Well, I haven't read the first chapter ( I know, lazy of me :p), but the story seems interesting so far. There are grammatical errors everywhere and I don't have ...
Nov 6, 2011